As
the dramaturg of this theater company, I am here to persuade you to rethink
your decision about cutting the opening monologues of Smith's play out. There
is a reason for everything in a script and the play would not be whole without
every word. Smith chooses to include these couple of monologues in the
beginning to preface the heavy subject of the Crown Heights riots. What I mean
by this is that Smith did not want to start the play by jumping directly into
the terrifying and grave deaths; she wanted to ease into it. Though it might be
hard to see when you first read they play, these opening monologues do relate
to the subject matter at hand. For example, in Static, the second monologue of the play, a Jewish woman tells a story about her religion. Though she says
nothing directly about the Crown Heights riots, it is just as important and
relevant. I say this because the racial divide between Jews and Blacks in the
neighborhood is what caused the riots. So Smith chooses to include these kinds
of monologues to show what it was like living as a Jew in the neighborhood at
the time, which is extremely important and influential to grasp before hearing stories
about the riots. Remember that in this play and every other play, nothing is a
mistake; everything written was for a reason. The monologues in the beginning
of the script, though you could not see their relation to the Crown Heights
riots, share the circumstances and the environment that the riots occurred in.
They paint the world of racial divide in Crown Heights, which is just as
important as the story of the incidents themselves. So please, I beg you, do
not start the play with "Lousy Language" because you will loose half
of the message and purpose.
The fact that you related the monologue about the Lubavitcher woman to the racial/religious feud between the Jews and Blacks is interesting. But I think that the Lubavitcher woman does have something to do with the riots because she is an Orthodox Jew. But you're right, Smith chooses to relate all of the monologues in the beginning to the ending's major issue. I also agree with you that the beginning monologues would take away immensely from the overall message that Smith is trying to demonstrate.
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